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  1. Chapter 4 is up!

    It took me some time to post up chapter 4 mostly because I had to rewrite this shit 3 times in a row and it was a pain in the ass! Thank goodness my recent dream has given me an idea for this chapter so I was finally able to finish it! Everyone I would like you to meet my favorite character besides Jayden named Jamie. He plays a huge role in the story and I love his personality and I sure hope you do as well! You can now post your feedback in the feedback section located here [click]
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  2. Chapter 3 is up yeah!

    So I finally got chapter 3 up and running. After two back to back action like chapters it's time to relax and chill at the best ramen noodles in town! I hope you guys enjoy the relaxing chapter and getting to know Prince Edward and another supporting character! This chapter is now ready for feedback! You can check it out at the feedback section here [click]
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  3. Chapter 2 is done at last!

    This was such a struggle and I'm so glad that I got it done! I went ahead and made my first feedback blog the main feedback section. You can post your feedback for chapter 2 there. I was reminded of how much I've enjoyed Oliver. He was always known to be the serious type with a laid-back personality. His goofy side tends to throw everyone off the radar when he gets serious but this time he was in something he wasn't comfortable with so him screaming and running around like a wuss was beautiful! ...
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  4. Story update

    Hey guys how is it going? I'm in the progress of chapter 2 as we speak. I'm on page 7 out of who knows how many pages. I might make this a long one depending on how this mission goes. It's going to take me a little bit to post it since I want to polish the chapter. After this it should be rather easy sailing from here. The other chapters are nice and fresh from my memory but chapter 2 is from 2013 memory so it's going to take me some time to make this look good. So far I came up with a list of 7 ...
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  5. My story feedback

    Hi guys I've finally posted up chapter 1 for my story! Before attacking me with your feedback, please make sure to review these rules here:

    • My Grammar sucks: Some people may know this about me but grammar was never my strong points however, I enjoy writing but I've always been nervous with posting up my stories because of my horrible grammar. Despite English being my main language, I've always seemed to have struggled with it back in my school life. I've went through a lot of
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    Updated 04-01-2018 at 04:10 AM by Nyanja

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